Looking through what I have done for Journey to Ariadne, I felt that part 6 isn’t feeling right. I’ve written it, but I don’t like it. I did a lot of thinking about how I want that part to go, and I think I like the changes.
Now all I have to do is rewrite that part. Not much is changed, really. However, the main part of the dialogue is going to be changed. There’s an argument, but the old way seems too artificial. I needed to rework everything about it. I thought about it while I was going to work, and a new idea started forming. I worked it out completely before I got to work. I have a good feeling about this. So, my next task is to write part 6 again.
In the meantime, I really should get to work on doing some critiques on Critique Circle so I can submit parts 4 and 5.