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From Andorra to Space! The Jay Dee Show 3

Another week, another group of video to share with you. In the past week, there were fewer videos, but partly because of my anniversary. Things should return to normal in the next week, though! This week, we looked at another country, Star Trek, and more. In my main channel, there were 6 videos.

First up is the return of the Library Book Hauls with my daughter. She continues to be silly.

Also returning is The Star Trek Project with episode 5.

Moving on to the Read the World Project, we take a look at literature from Andorra.

And then it’s the final video in the From East to West series about our move from Japan to Canada.

Then it’s a Retro Book Review. I take a look at Excelsior by George Sirois.

And finally, we go back to #16 of Authors Answer with a look at some online writing resources.

Then going on to my vlog channel, I posted 4 videos, though two should be coming tomorrow.

Up first, we got to watch some guy riding on the hood of a car in a parking lot. That day, there was some silliness going on.

And then I talked about doing search engine optimization and show you how I make hot chocolate.

Monday was our fifth anniversary, so my wife, daughter, and I went to Plate International Buffet, a great restaurant in Edmonton.

And last, we watched the Presidential Debate on TV, and I considered a drinking game.

And that’s all for this week! If you have any comments, please leave them below. And of course, please subscribe to my channels!

Book Review – Excelsior

excelsiorExcelsior, by George H. Sirois, is about a young man who writes a web comic that ends up being more true than he had ever imagined.  A young adult science fiction book, it’s very much your typical hero saves the day type of story.  There are many things to like about this book, but it’s not for everyone.

I should mention that this was an eBook that was published independently (paperback is also available), so I didn’t have high expectations for the editing.  In my past experiences with indie books, editing seemed to be poorly done.  However, I’m happy to say that this book is edited well, though there are a few minor mistakes with missing letters or punctuation.  But it was easy to read, the scenes were well-defined, and it was very easy to follow.

The story is a simple one.  A high school student named Matthew Peters writes a web comic called Excelsior that becomes quite popular.  However, it seems that his stories are more true than he expected.  His life is turned upside down.  What I found with this story is that it is a very straightforward hero story. No surprises, although creative, the plot isn’t unique.  However, after reading the afterword of the book, I see why it was this way.  I thought the story was very predictable.  Not that it’s always a bad thing.  Sometimes predictable stories give us a feeling of comfort and familiarity.  I did enjoy reading the story, though.  The action was described well, so I could imagine what was happening easily.

The characters are mostly your stereotypical characters in this kind of story.  Awkward teenager becomes the hero, supported by your usual cast of role models that guide and sidekicks that entertain.  I found that there was very little background information for the Denarian’s homeworld.  Where did the Krunation come from?  That’s something I’d like to know.  The dialogue was filled with cliche, something you’d read in a superhero comic.  And you know, that’s how I felt about most of the characters in this book.  The good were good and pure, the evil were completely evil.  There seemed to be no grey, it was all black and white.  It was all very campy, but gave me a bit of nostalgia.

Toward the end of the book, I noticed it could have a sequel.  If there is one in the works, I would read it.  It wasn’t a bad book at all.  It was entertaining, in a superhero comic kind of way.

Out of 5, I’ll give it a 3.  It’s a good read.  Don’t go into it thinking you’re going to read an amazing original story, though.  The feeling is familiar and comforting, but not very deep.